A mysterious abduction during the night while a
girl who happened to be home alone was held helpless. The abduction of April
Finnemore took place sometime between 9:30PM and 3:30AM. The next day everyone
in the town of Strattenburg had heard and was very concerned for the young 13-year-old
girl. Her best friend Theo has experience with the law. He searched the city
for her or some clues.
Theo’s parents
are both lawyers. April’s parents were not responsible and they both have
criminal records, her parents often leave her home alone. Everyone in town knew
about her weird and different family. There was a rumour going around that they
found a suspect. His name was Jack Leeper, he recently broke out of a
California prison and he was spotted at a local convenience store. They discovered
that April was his pen pal when he was in California. They thought that that
was obvious that he was responsible for the abduction. Jack pretended he knew
where she was so he could try to make a deal for example he doesn’t have to
stay at the California prison (because he did not like it). Theo told his uncle
Ike about the situation because he has many friends who do things that are
illegal so he gets inside information.
Ike was a lawyer until he did some illegal
things. Ike had a thought that maybe April’s dad who was never around because
he was in a band with a bunch of old guys who are drug addicts and criminals.
Nobody else in town thought it was Aprils’ dad.
I think there was too much
information on the little things and lot enough on the big things. The ending
should have been more interesting for example after the kidnapper (not saying
who) did not even get sent to prison and get sued or even any real punishment.
I got very excited about the ending but then I turned out to be disappointed
when I read it. They barely talked about the mom. They should have introduced
more characters.
This book had a very interesting subject but they could and
should have made it more interesting and with more detail. Although the book
was very exciting while I was reading it and I tried to predict what would
happen. I would not recommend this book because it lacks a lot of detail, even
though it was a good overall story.
Dear Jordy,
ReplyDeleteI liked reading your critical book review. I was wondering if you could elaborate on how the book impacted yourself and how it changed your view on the world.
Sincerely
Zac
Dear Jordy,
ReplyDeleteI was wondering if you could describe the setting and was wondering where your introductory sentence is.
Sincerely,
Jonah
Dear Jonah,
DeleteI briefly described the setting so here is some more information. It is a small town, low populated. It is quiet boring meaning it doesn't have much news so when there was this news everyone in town went crazy.
Thanks,
Jordy
Dear Zac,
ReplyDeleteAfter reading this book, I realized that everyone needs to be a little more sympathetic and not to judge a book by its cover (everyone thought the kidnapper was one guy who looked like a kidnapper, but it turned he was innocent).
Thanks,
Jordy
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ReplyDeleteDear Zac,
ReplyDeleteAfter reading this book I realized that you can't judge a book by its cover, everyone though the knapper was someone who looked like a kidnapper but he turned out to be innocent.
Thanks,
Jordy
Dear Zac,
DeleteThere was a problem, just ignore this.
Dear Jordy,
ReplyDeleteWhat was the lesson that you learned from the book? Was there a lesson at all?
Sincerely,
Adele
Dear Jordan Auger,
ReplyDeleteIn your second last paragraph you mentioned the prisoner, and "a" mom, I'm guessing this is the kidnapper's mom, this is the first time you mention her, what role does she have in the novel?
Sincerely, Connor
Dear Connor Moore,
ReplyDeleteBy the mom I meant April's mom. She was barely talked about and she was always ''out'' somewhere in town. She was a drug addict.
Thanks,
Jordy Auger
Dear Adele,
ReplyDeleteThe lesson was to not judge a book by its cover. Everyone thought someone was the kidnapper because he looked like one but it turned out he was innocent.
Thanks,
Jordy